Answer to Millenia

well, I was horribly disappointed with the no response, but i have a feeling that despite you guys decided, thoughtlessly, to ignore this, I still have to write the answer. So here it is:

60070 Alameda Rd.

Denver, Colorado

11/9/07

Dear Max,

            How do you do? What are you doing at your school? California is amazing with a lot of aquariums, theme parks, and museums. All of the fourth grade classes in our school, Garden Gate Elementary, went to a world-famous aquarium called the Monterey Bay Aquarium. The aquarium is famous for being the first aquarium in the world to capture a great white shark, and keep it in their aquarium. Last time I went there, which was in the summer, I actually saw a cartilaginous fish, the great white shark, and its relative, the manta ray, which is also a very dangerous fish. There were huge glass tanks of water, filled with marine animals. If you could come here, I would show you the amazing beauty of Monterey Bay Aquarium.  There are also shining, cute, and furry sea otters. On top there are waddling penguins on ice, getting ready to impress the curious children who are watching. Outside there are napping seals resting on moistened rocks. There is a chance you can see swimming whales. If you could come here, I would show you the amazing beauty of Monterey Bay Aquarium.

            Have you been to Raging Waters? It is like the coolest theme park you can go to in your life. It is all filled with swimming water. There are water monkey bars and a lot of swimming. There are a lot of buckets that pour on your head. You can swim deep because the water is pretty deep. There is a whole bunch of activities to do in the park. One place is a fake pirate ship. Once you walk in, a huge bucket that can probably hold ten gallons fills up and pours it on your head. In other places there are mini-waterfalls. You have to get through the waterfall to get into the area behind it. Some waterfalls are pounding hard and some waterfalls are dropping gently.
My favorite place is the Raging waters Wave Pool. It is named after the theme park’s name because it has immense and humongous waves that crash down on you. Only the people who have floaters are completely safe. There is a timer, and once that timer rings, the waves start coming. Every time a wave comes, it is stronger than the one before. I almost drowned the first time I went to cross the whole pool. If you came to California, I assure you, you will have a lot of fun with water.

            Is there an aviation museum in Colorado? Well, there is one here in California. It is so awesome! You get to look at models of old airplanes. There are some buttons on descriptions. Under the button, it will say what will happen if you press the button. For example, if it says the propeller will rotate, the propeller will rotate. The most fun part is, they allow you to go on a four seated airplane! There is a pilot for the plane. He gives you headphones to speak through. The most amazing part is that you can hear whatever the tower is telling the pilot! When I went, the pilot flew us so far; we were at San Francisco. It is a truly amazing sight.

            There are many places nearby me that are interesting, but these are my chosen three that I wanted to share with you. I hope you think California is a wonderful place. Please write me a letter back about Colorado. I am sure it is as wonderful as California. I have one question: Is there any National Parks in Colorado? There is one in California. It is called Yosemite National Park.

            Please write back soon.

Your Pal,

Srikar

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